My nephew
I have a nephew, his name is Taraka mirza, he’s
10 month old , he is so cute, has a white skin, short black hair, he’s so
active and funny. I always play with him every day, because I love him so much
like I love my brother, now he’s teething so he have four small teeth, every
day he try to talk with baby sign or baby language it so funny, I always talk
with him and he responding my question with baby language and that’s make me
laughing, even I laughing he laughing too, that’s so funny and make other
people laughing too.
so that's my short description about my nephew :)
he have four small teeth---> he has four small teeth
BalasHapusOh Dinar, you put a lot of commas there.
BalasHapusLike this, "I always play with him every day, because I love him so much like I love my brother,...". Put full stop after "brother".
:)
"he try to talk..."-->"he tries to talk..."
BalasHapus