I get up early in the morning
at four am, after that i take a bath and pray subuh.. after all i change my
clothes and have breakfast with my family.. my brother like cereal so much,and
i like fried rice so do my parents,sometime I ate fried rice in the morning. My father goes to work
by car, and my mother
is house wife, my brother and me goes
to school by a motor cycle, i
school in muhammadiyah university and i took english education in my
university.. my brother is still in junior high school,i finished the lesson at twelve pm,my brother and i took a English course,we have the
course on Monday until
Thursday we are start from one pm until three pm , after all we are go home and take a rest in the evening my mother serve some food and we are get ready for
dinner.
Sometimes every weekend we are visit
our grandparents house, and had picnic, when we are picnic we are went to
mountain or beach, because that place can relax our mind, on the other hand
when my parents felt so tiered we will spend our weekend just stay at home, and
did some activities, like watched movies, read books, played video games and
played at our backyard.
So that’s my daily activities on
every week :)
I want to correct your assignment :)
BalasHapus1. my dialy aactivities ---> My Daily Activities.
2. "after that i take a bath and pray subuh..". It's better if you use just 1 full stop :)
3. "my brother like cereal so much" ---> "my brother likes cereal so much".
4. "my brother and me goes to school by a motor cycle" --->
"my brother and me go to school by a motor cycle".
5. i took english education in my university." ---> "i take english education in my university.".
6." i finished the lesson" ---> "I finish the lesson"
7. "my brother and i took a English course" ---> "my brother and i take an English course"
8. "after all we are go home" ---> after all we go home
9." after all we are go home and take a rest in the evening my mother serve some food and we are get ready for dinner." I think it's better if you give full stop between take a rest and in the evening. "after all we go home and take a rest. In the evening, my mother serves some food and we are get ready for dinner."
10. "Sometimes every weekend we are visit our grandparents house," ---> "Sometimes every weekend we visit our grandparents house,"
You're right Risa, Dinar put more full stop there. It should be only one, not two.
BalasHapusi would like correct your task :)
BalasHapusover all i agree with miss Risa.
1. sometime I ate fried rice in the morning.
>> be better sometimes I eat fried rice in the morning.
( because sometime is meaning of : at an unknown time in the future or the past ).
2. motor cycle.
>> be better motorcycle
3. grandparents house
>> be better grandparents' house
4. my parents felt so tiered
>> my parents felt so tired.
that's all my corrected
:)
dinar
BalasHapusyou have to pay attention with transition word
i school in muhammadiyah university ====>
BalasHapusI study in Muhammadiyah university.
"when my parents felt so tiered..." ---> "when my parents felt so tired..."
BalasHapus